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I was an idiot
for believing you

You said you were an angel
and I ate up your lies
like they were candy

Now I'm falling

For you

falling too hard
pavement coming up too fast

Why couldn't you play the angel
The one you said you were
Catch me
Anything but let me fall

but no
You just watched me plummet

The little porcelain doll
cast away when it no longer amused you

With your velvet lies binding me
Your broken ended promises
Bringing me farther down

I shattered

And as I looked up
I could swear I saw horns
Right where your halo
Should have been

This was for a "Playing the Angel" contest but even though it ended before I got to write this, I still want to submit it. ^-^ Hope you like it.
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:iconserenecyrene:
SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Well written!
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AsterGirl Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Writer
thank you ^_^
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AsterGirl Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
I take it you liked it?
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:(
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